I wonder why the author...
I wonder why the author made Jane not answer the phone when he finally pushes his worry's aside. He instead called Carl. I personally would have written it so that she picked up but I think he wanted to make Jane more mysterious. I think this was good and bad because it delayed the story but kept me guessing so it was useful in certain ways. I'l also like to point out that he meets up with him later. This was interesting because Carl went to his old school. This was strange because he jumped back into the story and I though that was strange he would make him be the first person he would call. I think that Jane shouldn't have picked up and that is what I would have done.
How does this story remind you of you life...
I think it does because I think that I know what he might be going through because he could feel a little sad because Jane didn't answer and he could feel unselfconscious about his looks and I've been through the same thing and it is sad and very discouraging. I've also called an old friend of mine for advice so that connection is what I think when I thought. There might be another time but i remember called my old friend from third grade.
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I like your style but u should look at mauros he has a very well thought out blog.
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